In My Dreams Poem by Leeona (XOXO's) Sugakixs

In My Dreams

Rating: 4.9


Only in my dreams
will we meet up again
drag our feet through the beaches sand
stretch our shadows out toward the sunset
and bury kisses in the oceans mist
only in a dream could I imagine such a thought
only in a dream...
will you ever touch me again
softer than the clouds melt across the sky
only will you ever kiss me again
like the dew kisses the morning for coming
you hold me like rose peddles hug its rose bud before blooming
just being in your presence consumes me
when I dream about you
the dream is your thief
the perfect thief to steal my breath away
leaving me an inch of breath
just enough
for when we meet up again
outside our dreams, my dreams
then you'll take my heart
and the last gasp of breath you left me
this time leaving only a faint pulse
for us to slip away and stay in our dream

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Danny H 18 September 2009

I love the metaphor of the rose, this was splendid to read. Very consuming with emotion

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Mohammed Albalushi 19 September 2009

lovely and romantic dream, well write dear lee

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Poetic Soul 22 September 2009

A lovely romantic piece, consuming with deepest emotions and thoughts. Well done.

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Christina Phan 22 September 2009

Very lovely and sweeet kept it up 10+++

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Eyan Desir 21 September 2009

Well expressed It's nice to see in your pains there a soft spot of love 10s

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Erin Ford 21 September 2009

dreams are only a inch away it only comes to us if we chase after it.

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John Knight 20 September 2009

Hi Lee - another emotive poem another example of perfect FREE VERSE - it just flows and flows and flows like you experiences of love - 'Let your love flow like a mountain stream..................! 'I have a dream - that one day...............' 'We will meet up again' enjoy the sand - the sea - the kisses - your special touch 'Softer than the clouds melt across the sky' - Awesome! 'I have a dream......... ' You are the 'Perfect thief to steal my breath away' such beautiful language needs neither metre or rhyme to embellish it it is 'Free as Love'. Do we ever really meet up outside our dreams? Perhaps but in reality only 'For us to slip away and STAY IN OUR DREAM! '. This poem leaves me breathless - it is a little masterpiece. I scoe it 10 x 10 x 10. Keep dreaming keep sharing all your dreams in your lovely peotry. Love in poetry - JOHN.

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