In Chesterfield And Spats Poem by Donal Mahoney

In Chesterfield And Spats

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The father of the girl
I stare at now,
as we wait for our morning bus,
stands across the street,
tall and proper in his
chesterfield and spats.

He is waiting for a bus
that goes in the opposite direction.
He wears a derby,
swings a silver cane,
smokes a green panatela.
Suddenly he pirouettes

and smiles at my daughter.
She takes the same bus
to school every morning.
That night at supper,
I ask her about him.
'Dad, he's super! '

At 12, she knows.
'Dad, he rides the same bus
as me every morning.
He checks my homework
and I ask him questions.
Dad, he knows all the answers.'

Friday, June 13, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: sex
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Eugene Levich 13 June 2014

This poem presents (at least to me) a wonderfully surrealistic story and portrait—with a nice touch of suspense. It reminds me of some of the French poems of Jacques Prévert—high praise indeed! - See in particular “Dimanche.” Thank you! You made my day! I’m going to have to read your other poems.

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