In Between The Gap Poem by Abdul Wahab

In Between The Gap

Rating: 5.0


In life
Like my poems

I miss something
In the empty space

Among the words
And in between the gap

Of two lines
As I can not delve

And becomes
A cascade of warm water

To sprinkle upon you
Nor I can go high to condense

And fall upon you
Like a drop of dew

Inappropriate become
My actions

Like the words
I use

Without proper punctuations
My intentions are

Like my emotions
Misunderstood and misinterpreted.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Geetha Jayakumar 28 August 2013

Very beautiful write....it's like comma killed a man..punctuation can do misunderstandings..Loved reading it.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 28 August 2013

What is missed in the empty space is something to be filled in by the reader. Empty spaces make the poem more meaningful. Without emptiness a poem would be a monotonous single word which has no meaning. Thank you for a thought provoking poem.

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David Wood 28 August 2013

We all miss something in the empty spaces otherwise we would be brilliant and that would never do. We have to keep striving to be better.

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 28 August 2013

I miss something In the empty space Among the words And in between the gap great poetic lines!

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