~ In Between Change ~ [18 Words Poetry] Poem by MS. NIVEDITA BAGCHI SPC. UK.

~ In Between Change ~ [18 Words Poetry]

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~ In Between Change ~ [18 Words Poetry]
Ms. Nivedita
UK

Girlfriend
Changing
Dress
Before
Boyfriend.

She
Asked
Glowingly,
‘In
Which
One
Looked
Best? '

Boyfriend
Quipped,
‘In
Between
Change'

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bachha Chakravorty 01 April 2012

Hahahaha great jest in poetic format kudos tenner

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G.R. Gaus 02 April 2012

This is very clever, although I had to read it twice to get the joke......

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Hans Vr 04 April 2012

Nice one, Ms. Niv. Concise, funny, very well written

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Abhishek Tiwari 06 April 2012

Well, thats true form of poetry for me.. You have left the task for the reader to decide Whether to laugh at it! Or, to sqeeze the eyebrows and think it out! I loved it..

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Amitabha Bagchi 08 April 2012

Wow! What a humor? ? ? Filtered Stuff]]]] :) Ten+++

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Laughter is the best 'Poetic Medicine' Here poet intelligently served that thro' cerebrate way and it is 'rib-tickling' Great reading Thanks for sharing 10+

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Very intelligently and sophisticatedly crafted JOKE sensuality without vulgar Cheers

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Photode Photode 03 May 2012

Finest/filtered shade of enjoyable JOKE... poetically well presented...thanks for sharing

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Ali Hussain 03 May 2012

nice poem but there is no rimings keep writing, , , , ,

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Katang Chakravorty 28 April 2012

Fun~ Gun...is my comment Lol

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