! In Between Poem by Rema Prasanaa

! In Between

Rating: 3.0


From widening silence
and words, a soul
would like to depart
by its own and not
wishes to be erased
over compression
word for sure does not
want to harm any
further, wishes to step back
by its own and truth
endures all tribulations..
allow a fragment
of earth for a word
to scribble
a few lines before
it reaches heaven

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tapas Baidya 26 August 2008

Excellant! Truth lolerates many hazards but it survives in the widen space of unuttered words of poetries. Please read my poems if time permits. Thanks a lot. Tapas Baidya, Kolkata.

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Sarwar Chowdhury 08 September 2008

Ammmmmmmmmazing! ..........10

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Raj Nandy 08 September 2008

A beauty of a poem! I had written a poem with the same title once, but this one far excells! -Raj Nandy

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Kesav Easwaran 03 September 2008

good poetry in the real sense...words sad bitterly expressive fit rhythmic well into lines...a quality write, Rema 10+

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Vidyadhar Durgekar 02 September 2008

I have no words......... Beautiful composition

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Indira Renganathan 26 August 2008

somber verses of a truth..well done in simple style..superb

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