In A World Of No Secrets.... Poem by Brittany Graviet

In A World Of No Secrets....



In a world of no secrets.....
Wow what a change that would be.
We could hide nothing,
Everyone would know,
Our dark deeds,
And our virtues.

In a world of no secrets...
Its hard to imagine,
We could all be honest,
Because we couldn't lie anyways.
We could truly just be who we are.

In a world of no secrets....
I'm not quite sure I would mind,
If you knew my secrets,
And I knew yours.
I've always wondered what people hide.

I'n a world of no secrets....
No one could have,
Their own life.
It would be everyone else's too.
I'm not sure I would want that.

In a world of no secrets....
There could be no surprises.
No unknown thoughts,
No, 'I bet you didn't knows'
How sad that would be.

In a world of no secrets
We would probably think twice,
About what we are doing,
But then again they would know,
That we still thought about doing it.

Maybe there is secrets....
So that we can repent,
Of all those dark deeds.
So we can choose,
If we sin and lie.

I like our world of secrets....
The good out weigh the bad.
I like having some things,
Only to our selves.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Robert Whitney 02 October 2008

understandable topic, a beautifully put poem, and an exellant execution, some of your best work, post some more, some people may not like it, but it is always sure to dazzle some one

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Monika Marie 14 September 2008

What's great about this poem is that both perspectives are seen through the same eyes. Very creative.

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Jhonny Thermidor 14 September 2008

I like poems about life and love. The message in ur poems are strong enough to drag my dream to reality. Although u have many new poems I enjoy most of them. Among them are In a world of no secrets, My forever, ...

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Stacey Watts 13 September 2008

Wow your writing is getting really good.. I really enjoyed it and I make no secret about it..

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