In A Sudden Poem by lara arnaout

In A Sudden



in a sudden everything disappears
and everythung in its real way appears
the life pressure starts to increase
and you can hear your heart beats
and your balance starts to decrease
and you cant even breath

when all your dreams are turned down
and in the sea of lost you are drown
and sadness became your crown

your heart feel hurt
and you realize that people were made of dirt

all of that happens in a sudden
the sudden when you know that he didnt really love you

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Well, sometimes one discovers unpleasant things so suddenly and it feels exactly the way you've described it - excellent metaphor! Beautiful write... you hold a pen made of real emotions - that's the best poetic tool you could ever ask for :)

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