In A Remarkable Market Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul

In A Remarkable Market

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Market is a place where people get together,
They gather to purchase or sell things either.
There is a space or building is used for this,
Nugatory things are sold, nobody does hiss.

It is a place where everything people get,
Time to time it does differ in market rate.
Section by section commodities are arranged to sell,
For purchasing; these attract persons and compel.

In a line people avail flowers, leaves and vegetable,
Earthen pots are somewhere, fitments are attractable.
Clothes for men women and children are available here,
People purchase as per need paying amount clear.

Grocery shops are available in as section they stand,
People purchase for a week as per money at hand.
Herbivores are sold in a separate corner of this market,
Different types of seeds and herbicide people do get.

A to Z or needle to thread weekly people do get here,
But the remarkable thing is that every people should hear.
Some preachers come and with music they preach people,
God is one and merciful they say them with sample.

All are brothers and sisters same soul it is the religion,
Hot sun becomes soft and cold when it sits on horizon.
Blood of each person is equally red and same,
We must honour and praise instead of blame.

Wednesday, August 26, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: market,spiritual
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tushar Ray 26 August 2015

A beautiful description of a market place that I remember attending with my father close to my own village in W. Bengal as a child. Thank you for sharing Kumarmani. Tushar - -10

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Akhtar Jawad 26 August 2015

All are brothers and sisters same soul it is the religion, Hot sun becomes soft and cold when it sits on horizon. Blood of each person is equally red and same, We must honour and praise instead of blame. Enjoyed this description of get together, it's wonderful and it's message is universal....................10

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Kelly Kurt 26 August 2015

I shall probably never get to visit your wonderful country, but beautifully descriptive poems like this, take me there in my mind. Thank you

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Valsa George 27 August 2015

Now there are markets similar to big malls where we get everything from pins to motor cars! But the preaching part is something, I haven't seen in any market! Any way, a very lively market place is described with all its variety and extensiveness! Enjoyed!

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Ramesh T A 27 August 2015

Market place is where people of all categories meet to buy things from A to Z; also, it is the place for preachers to say about God and all are one and the same as blood is red in colour for all! A detailed treatise the poet has said in this poem!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 11 December 2016

picture of sunprincess ♡ ♡ ♡ x........great theme, and wonderful imagery....thank you for sharing....these are great lines ★ Market is a place where people get together, .. They gather to purchase or sell things either. 27 Aug 2015 by sunprincess ♡ ♡ ♡ | Reply picture of Ramin Ara xWell done Sir. 27 Aug 2015 by Ramin Ara | Reply picture of Angel mia LOVE xWonderful words my dear friend I love how you see us all equally ty I wish everyone would think as you describe yourself in the lovely poem ty for sharing blessings my dear friend xoxoxo 27 Aug 2015 by Angel mia LOVE | Reply picture of Chris G. Vaillancourt xNice poem 27 Aug 2015 by Chris G. Vaillancourt | Reply picture of Jane Taylor Hardy xI would love to be at this market and see the beauty and wonder that you so eloquently describe! 27 Aug 2015 by Jane Taylor Hardy | Reply picture of Nikunj Sharma xA market is nothing but a place in our minds, everything could be bought and sold for money, yet there are a few things that are put on shelves by the religion sellers, who in the name of god misguide people. Nice poem this. 28 Aug 2015 by Nikunj Sharma | Reply picture of Kesav Easwaran xBeautifully conceived and written piece 28 Aug 2015 by Kesav Easwaran | Reply

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Lyn Paul 01 September 2015

You certainly make the markets look like the place to be. Thank you

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 30 August 2015

Market place is nice. You go there and everything you need is there. Sometimes special days are set as market days and people go there to sell are buy them. Poem describes the market place beautifully.

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Madathil Rajendran Nair 28 August 2015

A good poetic illustration of a full-fledged market. (10)

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Savita Tyagi 27 August 2015

A very lively description of a market place. Enjoyed reading the poem.

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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