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kanav justa

Freshman - 1,035 Points (Shimla)

In a cold cold night


Sitting at my home
Peeping out through my window
I could feel the world was cold outside
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  • Bronze Star - 6,756 Points * Sunprincess * (12/11/2013 9:30:00 PM)

    oh kanav...I love this poem, I can envision the whole scene...you are a master of grabbing and holding the reader's attention....I love your writing style :) (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 2,756 Points Hazel Durham (12/7/2013 5:33:00 AM)

    To have everything but in the end a cold heart means an empty life, the old man had everything like wisdom and love to change peoples lives for the better. He knew the value of a caring and kind heart and soul to nourish and give warmth of his good nature to a hostile world!
    Loved this thought provoking and superb write! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Neetha Sasidharan (12/1/2013 10:32:00 PM)

    o my gosh....hats off man hats off.......just grt........
    bt coming frm u its not a surprise.........
    10 on 10...........kp going.........u will surely rise lk a sun... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 92 Points Yasmeen Khan (11/25/2013 7:51:00 AM)

    When we are not compassionate and kind towards others it's always cold inside away from the warmth of humanity, a poem with a message. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 222 Points Marie Shine (11/19/2013 12:29:00 PM)

    I love this poem, in which you allow the reader to enter your home through your eyes and view the world outside as you see it, Kanav...You narrate the story of the old gentleman to perfection and give the reader an insight into how life is for him, sadly. You are a wonderful story teller, Kanav. You slowly wind your way into the mind of your reader until your reader becomes one with your story. Lovely use of simile, metaphor and imagery. I really enjoyed reading this excellently crafted write, Kanav and I, thank you for sharing it with me. Blessings... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 319 Points Maya Hanson (11/18/2013 4:30:00 PM)

    I love this...its meaning is so deep and meaningful (redundance! redundance!) I love it and can't think of anything else to say because I love it too much. ;)
    ~mye3 poet (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,505 Points Dinesh Nair (11/15/2013 8:31:00 AM)

    The ancient Chinese painters drew picture of all sorts and asked others to see them through the latter`s eyes. The western painters drew what they liked and asked others to borrow former`s eyes to see the pictures..
    You have asked us to borrow your eyes for a while. Agreed and there we see something cold inside too. Excellent write Kanav Justa... (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,095 Points S.zaynub Kamoonpuri (11/15/2013 5:55:00 AM)

    Hmm so were u cold inside yor heart? Its human to b so sometimes. Whateva it is d poem is a remarkable aweinspiring one. Pls do review my latest poem (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 12,205 Points Valsa George (11/15/2013 1:45:00 AM)

    Through a beautiful story, you are trying to picture an inner landscape that lies so frozen, chillier than the external surroundings! We shall strive to warm it up and make it blaze! Enjoyed the suspense and the deeper meaning beyond the superfluous! ! (Report) Reply

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