In A Bottle Poem by Neela Nath Das

In A Bottle

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How does one feel if locked
In a bottle?
Breathing problem will start,
And wings will be disabled.
Freedom of thought, and work or speech
If are blocked, the wings
Of a free-spirit get broken
And her vision becomes blurred.

Monday, July 7, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: freedom
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sekharan Pookkat 07 July 2014

struggle for existence will kick out and free the wings

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Geetha Jayakumar 07 July 2014

Beautiful poem Neela. One will be choked to death...It's really a suffocation when one feels she is trapped. Short and sweet. Loved it.

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Chuy Amante 07 July 2014

What happens to a Free Spirit who breaks the bottle stands up, stretches her wings breathes in deeply and prepares for flight?

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