Impossiblity (Irenga) Poem by ivor or ivor.e hogg

Impossiblity (Irenga)



Glorious sunset,
the western sky ablaze with shades of red.
Nature’s artistry
beyond a mans ability
to emulate or imitate.

Nature’s artistry
beyond any mans ability
to emulate or imitate.
Although they still try.
Perfection beyond their grasp.

Natures artistry
beyond any mans ability
to emulate or imitate.
But driven by some inner need
they are convinced they can succeed.

First stanza
5 syllables
10 syllables
5 syllables
8syllables.
8syllables

Second stanza
repeat last three lines of first stanza
then
5 syllables
8 syllables.

Third stanza
Repeat
Last three lines of first stanza
Then
8 syllables
syllables
Japanese style poetry
no obligation to rhyme.


(22/07/2007)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tyler Markland 22 July 2007

good poem on the...imperfections of man.. kind of an odd style though... but to each his own.. and this would't be the same without that style

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ivor or ivor.e hogg

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Hebburn.Co Durham U.K
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