Impermissible Poem by Jazlle D. H. **contentment is the key to happiness

Impermissible

Rating: 4.9


What do we call this feeling
pure happiness and sincere?
Floating away like a cloud
moving away from the crowd
just the two of us above.

Above we're holding on to our dreams
we're trying to forget everything.
Swaying with our mixed emotions
and grasping what we cannot have
claiming that you and I exist.

Wishing just you and I forever
but we must wake up and realize
the reality...truth between us.
Let's face the world we tried to escape
and accept what is not really ours.


(30th May 2008)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tia Maria 29 June 2008

Ok.. I am reading through all your feelings and understanding like you cannot believe.... good, get it all out :)

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Michael Shaffer 06 July 2008

I love this. I can see your heart pouring onto the page. Pure passion and emotion.

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Michael Gale 14 January 2009

Great poem! God bless all poets-MJG.

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Tango 07 September 2008

Love is like the tide, it ebbs, and flows. We must nurture it like a seed, and tend it as it grows. An excellent poem. Tango.

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Patrick McFarland 03 August 2008

I think you capture a moment perfectly. The moment that infatuation becomes love with all it's pleasure and pain and yes, reality. Well done Joan.

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Chris Vanbrusselen 17 July 2008

DEAR JOAN.I THINK YOU ARE JUST LIKE ME.PROBLEMS WITH LOVE.AGAIN? ? ? ALWAYS LOVE?

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Ivor Hogg 08 July 2008

reality has a habit of pouring coldwater on our dreams

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