...Immortalize Men Poem by Eyan Desir

every body wants to be immortal not by world standards but by their own..each one's conscience speaks nothing else but that

hey Eyan.. strong revolutaionary stuff there been looking at CHE G's pic lately but very nice and potent lines...convet the message loud an clear you acn be proud of this piece...its a tenner cheers

Only great people think great, speak and do great things in the world and their works only immortalise them in the heart of future generations in the world! Men like lion-hearted Richards as more or less depicted in your poem will surely remain immortal in the world!

Overflowing feelings from heart and mind. Literally perfect and strong write.

i loved it that how o feel that was deep can you do the same for my poems thx

this poem has a power to inspire people... really beautiful and interesting... yet i was truly intregued by the title and the way you mentioned the title at the last.... very impressive... i liked it infact loved it...10+++

Immortality is a power to hold with greatness and humility under the viel of divinity...fabulous piece.10+++

Human being existence is only a blow in the cosmic eternity.

A great diversion from a long day.

10+ great good luck