Images Of God Challenged Poem by tim woodhouse

Images Of God Challenged

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God is a kindly old man,
His beard is long, white and flowing
And I'm trying the best that I can
To find Him and really start growing,
But it would be a bit of a laugh,
And I'm sure I'd be taken aback,
If the God of my mystical path
Was an attractive young female - and black!

It's just a thought - how can we know for sure?
Tim

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ashraful Musaddeq 18 October 2008

A poem with non-typical taste.

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Wojja Fink 17 October 2008

we can know for sure that all pots are made of clay how you descibe it is in what you say when a pot is broken does it's inner space fly away?

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1khmerking Kampuchea 17 October 2008

Hahahaha, good poem! I have also wonder that myself. You have good flowing rhyme. Oh... by the way, are you really born in 1964? Just asking.

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tim woodhouse

tim woodhouse

preston, england
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