jess achilles

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Im sorry


im sorry little girl wat have you done
i dint understand wen you had fun
i cared for you but you did wat you did
you took all thoes pills cuz you didnt want to live.

im sorry you didnt want my help as you fought alone
as your mothe walked out on you
and it was you and daddy alone.

Im sorry i stand over you grave
crying the pain i feel
i cant belive this pain is so real

im sorry kno one helped you
im sorry wat you did
im sorry for what you daddy thought was right
im sorry no more words can be spoken as you have passed the mind
im sorry i miss you and ill never forget all the good times
im sorry




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this pome was written today as i found out my best mates father had touche her and she killed her self and living with the pain it hurts

Submitted: Monday, April 09, 2007
Edited: Saturday, February 12, 2011

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  • Rookie Lolita Hiroshi (4/16/2007 9:36:00 PM)

    understanble....but sad... and it happens and it sure feels awful wen u feel like u didnt do anyting to help (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Stug Jordan (4/13/2007 4:19:00 AM)

    Well said, but written with a charming disregard for spelling and grammar which I almost don't want you to correct. Sorry about your friend, and well done for the way in which you've communicated how you feel, how your friend must have felt, and the horridness of the situation... S x (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Amber Luce (4/9/2007 5:46:00 PM)

    Wow. this poem is very touching. I can kinda relate. My friend is going through a tough time and tried to commit suicide many times with medication. You have some type-o's in here but besides that I give you a ten. About your friend..i send you my deepest condolences. (Report) Reply

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