Im Living My Life Poem by Tears From A Soldiers Eyes

Im Living My Life

Rating: 4.5


Part of my life is tatoo's, penetentry rules
When running yo mouth only seperates the men from the fools

Part of my life is bullets, guns, blood, sweat and tears
This is the part of my life that I've lived for years

Part of my life is dreams, wishes, hopes, happyness
Where I could care less about the world and its current happenings

Part of my life is lies, deciet, greed, envy, and hate
Which so many leaders of our world think is great

Part of my life is all the above
Cause everyday I see sadness and very little love

Part of my life has so much love to give
But I'm catching up with death fast, from the life that I live

Part of my life is wrong nor right
But I need no sympathy, cause I'm living my life.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dorothy- A. Holmes 14 July 2007

I love this poem! I love the truth spilling from all of it! 10 from me. Dorothy

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DaLovely One 03 April 2007

I'm really enjoying your poems. This is really interesting the way it's worded..

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Charley60 K 29 December 2006

Very interesting write.....well said..

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Kelly Hanson 08 December 2006

wonderful - your best yet! there are still a couple of sticky spots though. make it shine, daniel. you have a real talent

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