If Your Heart Pains Mine Can Not Laugh Poem by Elena Sandu

If Your Heart Pains Mine Can Not Laugh

Rating: 5.0


If your heart pains
how could mine laugh?

If your soul trembles in fear
how could mine dance?

I shall hold my hands
soon to have a glance

Of your happy face
laughing at lost worries

I will send my heart
to seek you all right

then I'll quietly try
all knots to untie, promise.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Akanksha Bhatt 08 October 2012

vow! its so beautifully written! it just shows the kindness of her for others! thanks for sharing such a great poem

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Siyabonga A Nxumalo 16 February 2012

To me, this poem is superb, i like the simplicity in it, its softness and that 'promise' just glorified your poem.thank you sister for such a beautiful poem.

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Dr.subhendu Kar 16 February 2012

heart sates on rune love engrossed as light of love reflexes in its mirror at each rung it dapples in colors vale still trembles joy being disowned, , emotive write by the metaphors,10+++, thanks for sharing

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Wabi Sabi 03 February 2012

I found it quite ordinary, however, there is something about this poem. And soon I got my heart warmed up! I feel healed. thanks! good poem, i like it! !

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