If You Think You Can, Try Harder Poem by Naida Nepascua Supnet

If You Think You Can, Try Harder

Rating: 4.8


{I made this poem for every annoying person we see around}

If you think you can break me
Think again for I'll disagree
I won't let you pin me down
Try harder I see your frown

If you think you can piss me
Try and try to the highest degree
You will never have the throne
Of someone who will have me blown

For I am tough tougher than you think
Very calm yet strong in every blink
I have courage that runs in my veins
Knowledge and wisdom stocked in my brains.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Flona Flona 02 October 2011

agree, very strong personality there. keep up the good work :)

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Miriam Maia Padua 05 October 2011

expresses strength... giving us the power of a strong personality a motivation...and a write with very good rhymes.. and good implications Thanks for sharing, Naid. and thanks for reading my works too...God bless _maia_

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Vipins Puthooran 06 October 2011

powerful, intellectual and challenging expression! (I have courage that runs in my veins Knowledge and wisdom stocked in my brains.) .. Strong words! I like this poem very much.Top marks....

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Jim Troy 06 October 2011

Many years ago this was sent to me and I love sharing it with my friends: Man learns by hardship slowly and pays with sweat for light He never would have seen the stars had he not seen the night.....Rousseau And your poem shows again how honest and strong passion your spirit is, and that is such a wonderful thing. Jim Troy

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Eric Cockrell 01 October 2011

another good poem... strong personality!

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Dr Antony Theodore 27 August 2015

For I am tough tougher than you think Very calm yet strong in every blink I have courage that runs in my veins Knowledge and wisdom stocked in my brains. very nice.. a poem full of confidence. thank you

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I have courage that runs in my veins Knowledge and wisdom stocked in my brains. WOW, a very strong and powerful words I've ever read

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Crimson Love 10 October 2011

beautifully written, an exceptional poem! well done....

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Romeo Della Valle 09 October 2011

A very impressive and powerful poem that clearly shows your honest interpretation of how you feel when around annoying people. I am sure most of us, one day or another, face these type of low self-esteem people and we have to be strong and ignore or walk away from them. I love your attitude in this matter and advice you to keep moving on. Stay strong my friend! 10+++ Keep inspiring the World with more such powerful writes! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City! ...

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Stefanie Fontker 08 October 2011

Very passionate. I love your refusal to give up, keep on fighting! Lovely poetry.

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Naida Nepascua Supnet

Naida Nepascua Supnet

bayambang, pangasinan, philippines
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