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Payal Parande

Rookie - 88 Points (8-7-1994)

If you say


If you say, I’ll bring the stars
I’ll use your love
to lasso the clouds
We’ll fly with our hopes
Hearing our thoughts clear and loud



If you say I’ll sing a song
I’ll write the
lyrics on my heart
Our beats will be the music
And words will be never apart



If you say I’ll paint the world
I’ll cluster the
colors of your soul
Coloring the world in one
And no one will be left alone

Submitted: Monday, February 17, 2014
Edited: Monday, February 17, 2014

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Poet's Notes about The Poem

hi again
i been gone from this site you can say i took a brake, and now i am lazy, so i had to get up and brush my self and here i am writing again and so take it as my first poem, a little poem full of love and hope and dreams and so much more... and i would like to say i missed you great poets, you are amazing and i am in love with you all


please enjoy
god bless you
with love
payal

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  • Freshman - 1,585 Points Sallam Yassin (11/15/2014 1:09:00 PM)

    oh your soul is great
    and your song is bright
    and you painted the canvas
    with passion of love in color of rainbow/ be blessed with love in peace (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 2,239 Points Patricia Grantham (8/19/2014 9:05:00 AM)

    Painting the world with colors so that we all can be
    as one. Stars, clouds, music and love coming together
    to paint a beautiful picture. An excellent poem with lots
    of sentiments. Well done Payal! (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,231 Points Tajudeen Shah (5/6/2014 6:51:00 AM)

    Dear Poet,
    cute tiny shell, sensibly beautiful, sharp to the points too. wonderful. God Bless.
    (pls see if you can comment on my very latest post ' The Most Concerned' rgds) (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,035 Points Kanav Justa (3/10/2014 1:24:00 AM)

    If you say I’ll paint the world
    I’ll cluster the
    colors of your soul
    Coloring the world in one
    And no one will be left alone, , , ,

    beautiful ending in this poem (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 440 Points V P Mahur (2/27/2014 1:32:00 AM)

    Love is universal and a truly loving heart wishes sweetness to all.
    Nice revealing of love
    Thanks for such sweet read
    I invite you to visit my page and read any of the poems for your comments. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 15 Points Swetha Vanakayalapati (2/23/2014 5:43:00 AM)

    well..if I hv to say about this poem....its simple and cute yet maturerd! bt if I hv to say/comment on ur notes written above there....I say same pinch! its common we take breaks, come back..the brushing and washing of brains and thoughts.....they render a twist and simplicity in presenting the texture of a poem..its evident from urs..keep penning payal :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 18 Points Suman Kumar Das (2/21/2014 10:44:00 AM)

    May all your hopes always shine like stars.
    May your song buzz everywhere.
    May your colourful world rest in peace and happiness forever.

    Beautifully penned.............so loving lines...Dear Payal! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 203 Points Nasarudheen Parameswaran (2/21/2014 4:47:00 AM)

    Dear Payal, it is a beautiful poem, so attractive scented with love. If you had used capital You then the lover would be ever loving God, the Creator. It is only a suggestion. Go on writing. (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 5,300 Points Geetha Jayakumar (2/19/2014 7:25:00 AM)

    Beautiful poem Payal....loved the lines...
    If you say I’ll sing a song
    I’ll write the
    lyrics on my heart
    Our beats will be the music
    And words will be never apart...

    Welcome back Payal. Keep writing. Once again a beautiful poem. Loved reading it. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Sahil Sood (2/19/2014 4:48:00 AM)

    The poem was mesmerising..
    I’ll write the
    lyrics on my heart
    Our beats will be the music

    Loved this part so much..
    I'm glad you are back.. Keep writing more :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 618 Points Musfiq Us Shaleheen (2/18/2014 10:52:00 PM)

    very nice Payal, very romantic feel its colored my valentine..
    love reading it and sharing.....
    keep penning... (Report) Reply

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