If Tomorrow Never Comes Poem by PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE

If Tomorrow Never Comes

Rating: 5.0


To see you
I come around
You see me
All year round
Nightingale
Says to rose
The affection
Butterfly shows
How much
You mean to me
I didn’t tell
To a good degree
I make a promise
Right away
To wont lose
The coming day
Against my cheeks
Rain drums
If tomorrow
Never comes

(2008/10/31)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ency Bearis 31 October 2008

wonderful poem...great... Ency Bearis

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Very wonderful.... I love it.... Thanks for sharing... -Brie

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Sathyanarayana M V S 31 October 2008

Good structure, nice thoughts, tender poetry..

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C. P. Sharma 31 October 2008

I shall say in Browning's style, Let you and me now together delight, Who knows the world may end tonight. Lol! ! ! but don't misunderstand me. It is not me! ! !

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Ermia ermia 31 October 2008

I think all iranians are talented. you are one of them!

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T S 16 March 2009

A very enjoyable read 10 plus

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Reihaneh Jalalian 14 November 2008

beautiful. it was really great.

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Thad Wilk 12 November 2008

Wonderfully depicted, solid penning my friend, right from the heart! Best wishes! 10 Friend Thad

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Reshma Ramesh 03 November 2008

this is a beautiful poem.......well penned

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Maryam Tootazehi 03 November 2008

Thank you for your comment. I also read your lovely poems and they were great =) Keep up the good work.. Moafagh Bashi, Maryam

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