isatou juwara

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If Tomorrow Never Comes - Poem by isatou juwara

Dear mother,
just now I realized
that man's stay on earth
is but limited
and that our days
are but numbered
and being mortal i know not
what lies ahead tomorrow.

But if tomorrow never comes
just you remember
that you had a daughter
who despite her teenage rebellions
adores you.

Please mother,
do tell my father
and my brother
that inspite of our differences
they were dear to my heart.

But to you my love
if tomorrow never comes
do remember those beautiful eyes of mine
that once mirrored the flame of love
that burneth within my heart.

And do remember
that though life be short
and unpredictable
its still a beautiful life, live it
I did!


Comments about If Tomorrow Never Comes by isatou juwara

  • Rookie - 111 Points Chris Orton (9/28/2014 7:36:00 AM)

    A beautiful piece of work. Thank you (Report) Reply

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  • Veteran Poet - 1,122 Points Leslie Philibert (9/28/2014 6:06:00 AM)

    Like this a lot, L7 needs (my POV) I not i, but I prefer straight grammar. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 5,710 Points Lorraine Margueritte Gasrel Black (9/28/2014 1:57:00 AM)

    no matter how strained a relationship is LOVE conquers all even if tomorrow is just a promise... a ten from me..lovely poem.. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 866 Points Liliana ~el (9/28/2013 5:13:00 PM)

    Whoah... this is intense and heartfelt. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 172 Points Gillian Commerford (9/28/2013 12:19:00 PM)

    Loved your poem.Well done. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Pardaz Sheikh (9/28/2013 8:16:00 AM)

    dancing poem .... thanks (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 111 Points Thomas Duncky (9/28/2013 5:46:00 AM)

    Nice and touching opus, glad to have had the time to read it. Worth of being poem of the day. Congrats Juwara (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,382 Points Jasbir Chatterjee (9/28/2013 2:31:00 AM)

    what a wonderful tribute to a mother from just as wonderful daughter.... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 20 Points Akanksha Bhatt (10/1/2012 12:37:00 AM)

    amazing just amazing! i liked it very much! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie D H (9/28/2012 7:24:00 PM)

    A memory, that brings out a reflection of what you are doing in your life. Beautiful poem, and with her memory. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Zachary R (9/28/2012 1:05:00 PM)

    A beautiful constructive poem, sent chills down my spine. I loved it. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 8 Points Dechen Doma Sherpa (9/28/2012 10:34:00 AM)

    simple expression of emotion beautifully laid out. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 22 Points Tanmayi Mukundan (9/28/2012 8:09:00 AM)

    such a wonderfully written poem! very simple yet touches the heart. makes me think that there are so many things i need to tell so many people today if tomorrow never comes. keep writing :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 5 Points Nurain Ali-balogun (9/28/2012 6:56:00 AM)

    Wow...this is breathtaking! I don't know what to say. Keep up the good work. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 26 Points Anita Sehgal (9/28/2012 6:11:00 AM)

    very beautiful.. touching.. brought tears to my eyes.. (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,382 Points Jasbir Chatterjee (9/28/2012 4:20:00 AM)

    congrats! Yes, it certainly deserves to be chosen as the poem of the day! Great poem! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 184 Points Karen Sinclair (9/28/2012 1:06:00 AM)

    At last a poem to relish and appreciate, great flow and such wonderful touching lines....it is so exceptional to me as a mother as sometimes as we get older we become a bit lost and for the child she brought into the world to turn around and consider her in such an unselfish compassionate way, to almost take her hand and say (live it like I did!) gorgeous touching write and congratulations on poem of the day... i can totally see why this was chosen...tyvm karen (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 51 Points Naseer Ahmed Nasir (11/12/2011 10:13:00 PM)

    Nice poem, Isatou! Keep up the good work! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 133 Points Allemagne Roßmann (8/26/2011 6:23:00 PM)

    The best of yours...reminds me of a song though but very poignant write. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Leslie Ching (8/11/2011 9:34:00 PM)

    A beautiful, artfully worded piece that makes a powerful impression on the reader with few words and simple ideas, rather like some of my own poems.
    Indeed, even though we may plan out each day to the finest detail, it is not in our hands to decide when the last of our days on earth will be...and because of this, we must treasure each and every second we have with our loved ones, since nothing lasts forever. A heartfelt write anyone can connect with,10++ from me.
    -Leslie- (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, August 9, 2011

Poem Edited: Tuesday, August 9, 2011


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