If Thoughts Were Wishes! Poem by Geetha Jayakumar

If Thoughts Were Wishes!

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Thoughts are so powerful
It can make you strong or weak.
It can take you anywhere any time.

Its just like magician rotating
his magical stick
just as he swings in air
Make you shivering with cold
While you are sweating in heat.

Inspiring thoughts can make you
Sing and dance
While you don't know single step of it.

Lovely thoughts
Make you feel as light as air
While you are seriously
thinking how to loose weight.

Challenging thoughts are like
Batsman ready for facing ball
To hit sixes or fours
But makes sure he is not out for duck.

Beautiful thoughts
Makes you feel as young as thirties
While you are at late sixties..
So evergreen at heart.

Blank thoughts are like
Sitting on the sea shore
And enjoying all the thoughts
All of a sudden waves gushes in
Washing away all your thoughts.

All the thoughts are good
Thoughts that not put into action
Is like the thoughts written on sand
With no outcome for anything!

© 2014 Geetha Jayakumar. All rights Reserved.

Friday, July 12, 2013
Topic(s) of this poem: life,poem
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 31 August 2019

Dear madam, you have astutely and incisively delineated about thoughts in this poem Thoughts are much powerful. These can make us strong and weak. Inspiring thoughts can make us sing and dance where as Lovely thoughts make us feel as light as air. I appreciate the way of presentation. Many many thanks to you. It is going to my poem list.10

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Akhtar Jawad 30 November 2017

All the thoughts are good Thoughts that not put into action Is like the thoughts written on sand With no outcome for anything! ...........................great stanza of an excellent poem.

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David Wood 12 July 2013

A delightful poem with very good imagery. A very good write.

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