Adeline Foster

Gold Star - 4,838 Points (Instructor of poetry, Hagerstown, MD)

~if There Be No God - Poem by Adeline Foster

~ If There Be No God

If there be no God,
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Comments about ~if There Be No God by Adeline Foster

  • there is a poet in me! (9/14/2009 2:55:00 PM)

    this too a beautiful poem with a powerful message...... (Report) Reply

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  • Lillian Thomas (8/6/2009 3:39:00 PM)

    nice sentiment. well structured, though I would like it better if the repeating line was repeated only once per stanza. Still you hose great examples for your imagery. my favorite lines are:
    'Then all the stars, that in their place
    Have eons roamed abroad,
    Would long ago have lost the trace' (Report) Reply

  • Godspower Oshodin Godspower Oshodin (6/19/2009 2:42:00 PM)

    This poem is a kind of cryptic, i so much love the style used. 'If there be no God, i guess man will feel the plight' (Report) Reply

  • Ron Flowers (5/14/2009 7:14:00 PM)

    Simply beautiful, Adeline.

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  • Paige S (4/23/2009 4:39:00 PM)

    This is so very beautiful. I have been searching for a poem like this on PH for sometime now, and I finally found it. Thank you so much for writing this. It is so lovely, and has a powerful message that all the world should hear.

    Sincerely,
    Paige (Report) Reply

  • Kale Beaudry (4/20/2009 7:12:00 PM)

    Even from an agnostic point of view this poem makes perfect sense.
    Our world definitely wouldn't be what it is today without Him or Her.
    Short and sweet. (Report) Reply

  • Ron Flowers (12/16/2008 6:35:00 PM)

    I love the poem, I love the beautiful way it is written, I love the message.

    Regards
    Ron (Report) Reply

  • Linda Ori Linda Ori (12/2/2008 12:18:00 AM)

    Lovely piece, Adeline. God makes it all possible, and sometimes I wonder what kind of people are responsible for all the pain and suffering in the world. Certainly they have no God in their lives, else they could not treat their fellow man the way they do. Your words are few but powerful.
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