Adeline Foster

Gold Star - 7,070 Points (Instructor of poetry, Hagerstown, MD)

~if There Be No God - Poem by Adeline Foster

~ If There Be No God

If there be no God,
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Comments about ~if There Be No God by Adeline Foster

  • Leah Ross Leah Ross (4/22/2016 4:45:00 PM)

    very beautiful very profound write makes one think (Report) Reply

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  • Human Woman (4/20/2016 12:48:00 PM)

    Thank you, Adeline. You reminded of the main things in our life. (Report) Reply

  • Liza Sudina Liza Sudina (3/16/2016 2:17:00 AM)

    I like how exactly you mention the main things to show the nonsense of not believing in God. Thank you!

    Would be a fake-a senseless fraud;
    Each for himself alone would stand-
    No honor-if there be no God. (Report) Reply

  • Vincent Bayer Vincent Bayer (1/31/2016 1:00:00 PM)

    there is something very compelling about this simple yet beautiful poem. (Report) Reply

  • Noreen Carden Noreen Carden (1/26/2016 12:29:00 PM)

    Simply and beautifully written Adeline very enjoyable read well done (Report) Reply

  • Roseann Shawiak (1/10/2016 2:38:00 PM)

    Brilliantly and simply put, amplifying the reality of God in our world. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn (Report) Reply

  • Howard 'the motivational poet' Simon Howard 'the motivational poet' Simon (1/6/2016 12:16:00 PM)

    A powerful perspective of faith that is both compelling and creative! (Report) Reply

  • Oladipo Daniel Akinnusi Oladipo Daniel Akinnusi (12/18/2015 11:14:00 AM)

    If there be no God, man would have been king. I think I got the message in your comment now. It is only God who could determine future and the standard of my works. I agreed with you. Great work (Report) Reply

  • Akhtar Jawad Akhtar Jawad (12/1/2015 2:28:00 AM)

    A nice logical proof of His existence................................................ (Report) Reply

  • Charles Darnell Charles Darnell (11/22/2015 4:55:00 PM)

    While I disagree with the premise of the poem, I admire the concise and straightforward manner in which it is conveyed. Well done. (Report) Reply

  • Kim Barney (11/7/2015 10:32:00 AM)

    Great poem. I left a comment on it last July, but had to come back and read it again. Plus I am adding it to my favorites list. (Report) Reply

  • Patti Masterman (11/7/2015 12:12:00 AM)

    Adeline, I confess your poetry reminds me somewhat of Ella Wheeler Wilcox, also a magnificent writer. (Report) Reply

  • Kul Rai Kul Rai (10/27/2015 3:33:00 PM)

    of course your words are true...very true..thanks for such art.. (Report) Reply

  • Marilyn Lott Marilyn Lott (10/26/2015 5:45:00 PM)

    I totally agree with your poem. So many things would be changed and sad, if there be no God. Very nice! (Report) Reply

  • Hans Vr Hans Vr (8/25/2015 7:02:00 AM)

    I am so much with you on this, Adeline.
    If there 'd be no God, atomic war would have long terminated our existence.
    There is so much violence and negativity on TV,
    but I notice in the heart of women and men,
    a new kindness is blooming, all around the world. (Report) Reply

  • Curtis Johnson (8/22/2015 11:46:00 PM)

    Adeline. Thanks for posting, If There Be No God. The use of two entities, the universe and Man, is very effective.
    After all, The heavens declare the glory of God....; and man is made in God's image. What a clever presentation in so few words! I love it! GBU. Curtis. (Report) Reply

  • Kim Barney (7/29/2015 7:49:00 AM)

    So true, so very true. Well written.
    I will read more of your poems. (Report) Reply

  • Michael Walker Michael Walker (7/15/2015 11:04:00 PM)

    A very persuasive argument. M. Walker. (Report) Reply

  • Herbert Guitang Herbert Guitang (7/3/2015 8:07:00 PM)

    So wonderful poem. I am really touched with this poem. (Report) Reply

  • Elisha Wall Elisha Wall (1/19/2015 12:52:00 PM)

    What a wonderful piece that conveys the undeniable truth. There is a God whose law is written on the stars and the hearts of men. Thanks a lot! (Report) Reply










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