Adeline Foster

Rookie - 299 Points (Instructor of poetry, Hagerstown, MD)

~If There Be No God


If there be no God,
Then all the stars, that in their place
Have aeons roamed abroad,
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  • Freshman - 1,379 Points L. E. O. Gibraltar (1/19/2015 12:52:00 PM)

    What a wonderful piece that conveys the undeniable truth. There is a God whose law is written on the stars and the hearts of men. Thanks a lot! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 21 Points G Sweeney (7/29/2014 9:01:00 AM)

    I like your poem as it is touching and so refreshing too (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,851 Points Patricia Grantham (6/30/2014 9:17:00 AM)

    An excellent poem Adeline and very well written in
    short verses. Surely there is a God who knows it
    all and who also rules the Earth. Well done my poet
    friend. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Deepak Sawhney (9/13/2013 11:38:00 PM)

    : -) A free for all. A chaotic world. Every man for himself. No datum or yardstick, everything subjective & interpreted as per one's own convenience. Too true! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 187 Points Prasanna Kumari (11/26/2012 5:24:00 AM)

    whether God created man or man created God it is essential to have faith in God to have a peaceful and happy life ultimately.... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Matthew Fowler (11/18/2012 8:56:00 PM)

    I believe that if there was no god, there would be no war, scientific advancements would come uncontrollably, there would less racism, and man would be able to look at the stars and not think of letting god do all the work but helping to move humanity forward. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 172 Points Gillian Commerford (11/17/2012 8:46:00 AM)

    Liked it and will read more of your poems (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,479 Points Howard 'the motivational poet' Simon (11/16/2012 10:08:00 PM)

    The raw, rabid reality of a world without God is here excellently expressed. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 33 Points Mark Dillon (11/15/2012 11:57:00 PM)

    we all believe in a higher power, and we all aspire to do whats right an just in its presence, if that was not there what would we all aspire to? short and to the point. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 894 Points Cynthia Buhain-baello (11/15/2012 8:36:00 PM)

    Excellent discourse on the proof that there is indeed -God. Brilliant in brevity and deeply profound in Truth. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Nurain Ali-balogun (11/15/2012 1:03:00 PM)

    If there be no God, then there will be no order in the world. Good poetry! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Ifetayo Abiola (11/15/2012 7:56:00 AM)

    ummm, I am so happy there is God (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,742 Points Babatunde Aremu (11/15/2012 5:48:00 AM)

    You are totally correct. Only the fool denies God. Great write, I like it (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 11,264 Points Sandra Feldman (11/15/2012 1:11:00 AM)

    I like it very much, but please tell me is there any Honor or Justice left, anyplace, anywhere? ? ? (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sangnam Nam (11/14/2012 6:13:00 PM)

    Majestic...! God's protections are everywhere including in our hearts and the universe..Well done, my friend! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Sunil Babu (9/5/2012 10:36:00 AM)

    great and grand...if there be no god, devils will rule the roost (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 4 Points Frank Mceleny (9/3/2012 11:43:00 PM)

    Very good Adeline. I worte something in that theme it is called If I did not believe. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 259 Points Joseph Anderson (8/31/2012 2:22:00 PM)

    If there be a God he needs to make an appearance now. We and nature are in dire straits.
    A truly provocative poem of depth..My faith is in an uneasy mode (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 1 Points Bonnie Shipman (1/31/2012 6:56:00 PM)

    Astute and unflinching reasoning. Concise writing. This poem stands straightedged in the winds of thought. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Kellsey Hartmann (1/4/2012 11:05:00 AM)

    I definitely agree. I love this poem. (Report) Reply



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