Adeline Foster

Silver Star - 3,389 Points (Instructor of poetry, Hagerstown, MD)

~if There Be No God - Poem by Adeline Foster

~ If There Be No God

If there be no God,
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Comments about ~if There Be No God by Adeline Foster

  • Rookie - 244 Points Charles Darnell (11/22/2015 4:55:00 PM)

    While I disagree with the premise of the poem, I admire the concise and straightforward manner in which it is conveyed. Well done. (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 28,812 Points Kim Barney (11/7/2015 10:32:00 AM)

    Great poem. I left a comment on it last July, but had to come back and read it again. Plus I am adding it to my favorites list. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 786 Points Patti Masterman (11/7/2015 12:12:00 AM)

    Adeline, I confess your poetry reminds me somewhat of Ella Wheeler Wilcox, also a magnificent writer. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 279 Points Kul Rai (10/27/2015 3:33:00 PM)

    of course your words are true...very true..thanks for such art.. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 975 Points Marilyn Lott (10/26/2015 5:45:00 PM)

    I totally agree with your poem. So many things would be changed and sad, if there be no God. Very nice! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 5,112 Points Hans Vr (8/25/2015 7:02:00 AM)

    I am so much with you on this, Adeline.
    If there 'd be no God, atomic war would have long terminated our existence.
    There is so much violence and negativity on TV,
    but I notice in the heart of women and men,
    a new kindness is blooming, all around the world. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 4,147 Points Curtis Johnson (8/22/2015 11:46:00 PM)

    Adeline. Thanks for posting, If There Be No God. The use of two entities, the universe and Man, is very effective.
    After all, The heavens declare the glory of God....; and man is made in God's image. What a clever presentation in so few words! I love it! GBU. Curtis. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 28,812 Points Kim Barney (7/29/2015 7:49:00 AM)

    So true, so very true. Well written.
    I will read more of your poems. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 4,975 Points Michael Walker (7/15/2015 11:04:00 PM)

    A very persuasive argument. M. Walker. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 8,689 Points Herbert Guitang (7/3/2015 8:07:00 PM)

    So wonderful poem. I am really touched with this poem. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,431 Points L. E. O. Gibraltar (1/19/2015 12:52:00 PM)

    What a wonderful piece that conveys the undeniable truth. There is a God whose law is written on the stars and the hearts of men. Thanks a lot! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 32 Points G Sweeney (7/29/2014 9:01:00 AM)

    I like your poem as it is touching and so refreshing too (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 5,737 Points Patricia Grantham (6/30/2014 9:17:00 AM)

    An excellent poem Adeline and very well written in
    short verses. Surely there is a God who knows it
    all and who also rules the Earth. Well done my poet
    friend. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Deepak Sawhney (9/13/2013 11:38:00 PM)

    : -) A free for all. A chaotic world. Every man for himself. No datum or yardstick, everything subjective & interpreted as per one's own convenience. Too true! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 229 Points Prasanna Kumari (11/26/2012 5:24:00 AM)

    whether God created man or man created God it is essential to have faith in God to have a peaceful and happy life ultimately.... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Matthew Fowler (11/18/2012 8:56:00 PM)

    I believe that if there was no god, there would be no war, scientific advancements would come uncontrollably, there would less racism, and man would be able to look at the stars and not think of letting god do all the work but helping to move humanity forward. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 172 Points Gillian Commerford (11/17/2012 8:46:00 AM)

    Liked it and will read more of your poems (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 6,656 Points Howard 'the motivational poet' Simon (11/16/2012 10:08:00 PM)

    The raw, rabid reality of a world without God is here excellently expressed. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 33 Points Mark Dillon (11/15/2012 11:57:00 PM)

    we all believe in a higher power, and we all aspire to do whats right an just in its presence, if that was not there what would we all aspire to? short and to the point. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,272 Points Cynthia Buhain-baello (11/15/2012 8:36:00 PM)

    Excellent discourse on the proof that there is indeed -God. Brilliant in brevity and deeply profound in Truth. (Report) Reply

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