If Sometime Poem by Aparna Mirajkar

If Sometime

Rating: 4.8


If sometimes you feel, that I am being weird,

Hold me close, I might be needing your hug

If sometimes you feel that I am being too argumentative

Let me win, I might be disturbed

If sometimes you feel, that I don’t obey u

Convince me like a child, perhaps I might want you to pamper me

If sometimes you feel, that I am talking a lot

Listen to me, I might have spent a lonely day

If sometimes you feel, that I am not on speaking terms with you

Give me time to accept the new decision you might have made.

If sometimes you feel that I am losing interest in you

Tell me how much you love me, I might be wanting to hear it.

If sometimes you feel that I am getting too possessive about you,

Don’t get irritated, it might just mean that I love you, and cant stay without you.

And if sometimes you feel, that I have grown old and irritating

Don’t leave me, don’t curse me, perhaps I might need you and your love the most.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rema Prasanna 13 June 2008

Meaningful write.... i can feel a heart really in need of love, care and support. good one.. Rgs Rema

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anurag duggal 09 June 2008

this is one nice poem

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Rani Turton 06 June 2008

I liked this poem a lot, would have preferred the 'u' to be written as 'you' but that's a personal standpoint, makes for readability which is what I feel.

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Kesav Easwaran 04 June 2008

you need his love most and he too yours...a love poem that conveys pure and sincere love...remember my previous comment, aparna! ...your talent has started showing! *10*

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Marvin Brato 04 June 2008

Great poem... it made me think of my wife! I have to make a move NOW! A 10.

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