If Only You Knew Poem by Jhonny Thermidor

If Only You Knew

Rating: 5.0


If only you knew the truth,
The roses would never be faded,
The birds would keep their rhythm,
& our love would keep flourishing!

If only you knew my own world,
The day wouldn't be that dark,
The stream wouldn't be anhydrous,
My heart would not be restless!

If only you knew my real emotion,
My memory wouldn't be that blurred,
These words would touch your heart,
And alleviate the mourning inside!

If only you knew, my beloved,
How authentic my feelings are,
How pure this relationship could be,
You will preserve this celetial love!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jolenish Fiber 01 May 2008

it seems like your trying to convince her, is there something wrong going on in the poem to be so passionate in a defensive way? by all means, very wonderful as ever, but i can sense that something is off key with the relationship because of your intent in this poem.

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Samantha Gibson 21 April 2008

wow i am touched that was quite passoinate very nice

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Evaughn Gray 22 December 2007

wow that was beautiful, i loved this one too! your wonderful when you write..i love your work..~hazel

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Jhonny Thermidor 10 December 2007

Passion is what keep me alive, Beloved!

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