If Only I Had Noticed Poem by Brandi Knecht

If Only I Had Noticed

Rating: 5.0


Now as I stare at you,
I notice what I had missed before,
I never noticed that sweet look on your face,
I never noticed how when I look in your eyes all my fear is swept away,
I never noticed how that goofy smile always made my day.

Now that I notice these things I cannot have them.
If only I had noticed these wonderful things about you while I still had you! !

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Brian Dorn 07 December 2006

Good poem, Brandi! It has a nice quality to it... certainly worth 'noticing.' Brian

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Nut Fuck * 17 November 2006

that is the problem tho you never actually notice the best things untill it is gone.

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