.....If Love Were Like Water (Best Love Poems) Poem by Charles Wiles (Best Love Poems)

.....If Love Were Like Water (Best Love Poems)

Rating: 4.5


If love were like water
I'd build you a fountain,
And if love were like stone
I'd bring you a mountain.
If love were like air
I'd set whirlwinds free,
But as these are not love
I'll just give you me.

(1995)

Wednesday, September 17, 2008
Topic(s) of this poem: mountains,water,love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Becky Mccauley 08 February 2012

I enjoyed this poem so much! I'm going to tell it to my boyfriend.

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Miriam Maia Padua 27 August 2009

Wow...this is so sweet... really flowing with love...I love the thoughts here.. really impressive.. thanks for sharing such lovely poems.. 10 Lovelots, Maia

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Michael Williams 21 February 2012

I like this one alot. Short simple and to the point.

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Okafor chinonso 25 April 2018

How I wish I had such tone,,,,,,,charles is a nice talented poet

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jullianne 09 November 2017

its short but i love it!

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JT 07 December 2021

Nice

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Chinedu Dike 13 November 2021

A beautiful rendition of words.

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Susan Williams 21 September 2020

oh and I would give it a multitude of tens if one were allowed to- - so since I cannot I will give it a 5 star rating

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Susan Williams 21 September 2020

Sometimes you fall in love with a poem the instant you read it and all you want to do is read it again and again- -well, I have fallen in love with this one and shall sit here and reread it over and over again.

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Chiori Mathew 30 October 2019

That is the real sign of true love not all about materialism everytime nice one Pls comment on my work IGARA CHICKEN

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