Persian Nightingale

If I Were You - Poem by Persian Nightingale

If I were you
I should rain
Every moment
I should share my love
With the thirsty land
Who is going to go on a fast
Again and again
If I were you


Comments about If I Were You by Persian Nightingale

  • Rookie Habib Abodunrin Zakari (3/12/2009 5:59:00 AM)

    this is also another poem you should publish, but the first two lines should read

    If I were you
    I would rain (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Linda Weischedel (1/25/2008 1:27:00 PM)

    Lovely poem for sure! ! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie ... ... (1/5/2008 5:29:00 PM)

    Well written, beautiful. Thanks for sharing your precious talent. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Ewigi Liebe (1/5/2008 1:03:00 PM)

    wonderfully said...but sometimes was^nt easy at all..well you got point of you...if you were will share what gods wanted you to share! good one (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, January 5, 2008

Poem Edited: Monday, August 4, 2008

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