If I Were You Poem by PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE

If I Were You

Rating: 4.5


If I were you
I should rain
Everyday
Every moment
I should share my love
With the thirsty land
Who is going to go on a fast
Again and again
If I were you

(2008/1/5)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Habib Abodunrin Zakari 12 March 2009

this is also another poem you should publish, but the first two lines should read If I were you I would rain

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Linda Weischedel 25 January 2008

Lovely poem for sure! ! ! !

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... ... 05 January 2008

Well written, beautiful. Thanks for sharing your precious talent.

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Ewigi Liebe 05 January 2008

wonderfully said...but sometimes was^nt easy at all..well you got point of you...if you were me...you will share what gods wanted you to share! good one

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