If I Were With You Now Poem by Khairul Ahsan
If I Were With You Now
I can see clearly, you are in pain now.
I wish I were with you, to hold you
In my arms and give you a big hug.
To look at your eyes and assure you
Of my friendship, and ask you to look
At mine and read the letter of solidarity
That my seeking eyes behold for you.
And with my parched lips I would
Dry off the pearls of tear that hang on,
And whisper some words into your ears
That would instantly turn the heavy sob
Into waves of light laughter, thereafter,
Holding hands we would walk miles and
Miles, to a secret destination, together!
Cheer up, baby! I know it's not so easy.
You have only one life to live, one only.
For how long more do you wish to live
In a world of despair? You are honest,
Forthright, warm, open and passionate.
Your love is intense and overwhelming,
Your emotions run deep and you have
Deep obsessions too. As you search
For truth, you find the beauty of pain.
And that God cries for you in the rain.
Beautiful poem to share pain in a passionate way. Loved reading it.
God cries for you in the rain....such a delicate line, that carries so much weight! Your bundled up kindness, in written verse, a pleasure to unwrap. Visiting your pure emotions, like spending a day with a much welcomed friend. PEACE
Thank you, Susan Lacovara, for your very profound thoughts about my poem and me myself. Much, much obliged and inspired! I've just read your poem - 'What To Do About Remembering' and left a comment there.
Thank you, @Kirti Sharma, for your kind appreciation. I'm much inspired by your kind comment. I've just read your poem - 'The Incomplete Lines' and left a comment there.
You are such a gifted writer and no matter what i read u find a way to to connect in me. I enjoy feeling as though i am a part of what u are writing whether it is sad, longing, or free. this one made me feel a sense of understanding and deep friendship. many times in life people just need to see or hear that little encouragement. thank you.. and please keep writing. I look forward to more.
Dear poet @Crystal Conrick-knight, I am so much inspired by your kind words! I hope you've had time to read some more of my poems. I've just read your short poem- 'Wits' and left a comment there.
@ Sandra Feldman, Thank you very much for feeling the feelings. Your comments are more than kind. Thanks for the generous 10/10. Truly inspired.
Intense, deep, full of feeling. Such sweet and calming words. Never a suffering soul was consoled in this tender, sentimental and beautiful way. Anyone's pain would be a lighter burden after this. Really touching! ! Beautiful flow and style too.10/10
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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I absolutely adored this verse And with my parched lips I would Dry off the pearls of tear that hang on, Your poems are always filled with such passion!