If I Were Me.. (Open Iit Creative Writing) Poem by Abhinit Chute (abz)

If I Were Me.. (Open Iit Creative Writing)



If I were me,
With all of my covers peeled out,
With all the outer layers eroded,
And each piece of this disguise faded out..

If I were me,
With nothing of me forbidden,
With a firm and intuitive conscience,
My calibre wouldn't let anything hidden..

If I were me,
With my mind completely stable;
I would do what I have to,
Being the least approachable..

If I were me,
My teeth wouldn't hesitate to make way
For my toungue, full of anxiety,
Too smothered and dug in to wake & say..

If I were me,
Hypocrisy wouldn't have found my body to appear;
If I were me,
I would be the one with each bit of a concept clear..

If I were me,
I wouldn't fight with the one, trapped inside my chest;
If I were me,
I weren't a lier; I would just be at my best!

If I were me,
My decisions were never wrong; rather so strong..
'If I were me? '
Is a question that makes my mind to think so long...

Saturday, August 23, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: imagination
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Gajanan Mishra 23 August 2014

very good writing, thanks, I like it.

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