If I Were A Bird Poem by Aftab Alam

If I Were A Bird

Rating: 5.0


My beloved;
If I were a bird
I would have come to you dear
If I were calm breeze
I would have kissed your hair

Minds intricacy, why to tell!
Neither it solves nor resolves
Heart that beats,
Ah! What to say
Neither make me to understand
Nor understand
I became a handicap
Keeping distance
Unable to walk a single step
mind runs with pep

My beloved;
If I were a bird
I would have come to dear
If I were calm breeze
I would have kissed your hair

My desire, to greet,
In my sweet dream
Can’t we meet?
Seeing you with wide opened eyes
But can’t touch,
I have became a charmer
Kept memory dumbbell
When I remember you, my dear
Dream speaks...

My beloved;
If I were a bird
I would have come to dear
If I were calm breeze
I would have kissed your hair

Saturday, October 5, 2013
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Unwritten Soul 05 October 2013

So beautiful, lovely and pleasing! ....truly liked it! _Soul

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Neela Nath Das 06 October 2013

U.S is absolutely right.A gem it is! Fantastic.

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Nasarudheen Parameswaran 06 October 2013

Intensive love drizzle here.

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Ibnu Din Assingkiri 06 October 2013

beautifully crafted. a very matured expression of love. subhanallah!

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Marvin Brato 10 October 2013

Beautiful composition, very romantic!

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 06 October 2013

Beautiful poem. I captured the beauty here though your original Hindi/Urdu. Thank you.

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Tajudeen Shah 06 October 2013

dear aftab bhai salam glad to read your review of my poem, and to read your poem. thanx. now, the one ousted in my poem, the outcast is Satan, not Adam asws. please read again. InshaAllah, the wise prophet of us, our great grandfather, Adam Alayhi salatuwassalam remained blessed. salam to HIm too. rgds. taj shah

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Gajanan Mishra 06 October 2013

If I were a bird, very good write, thanks.

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Gajanan Mishra 06 October 2013

If I were a bird, very good write, thanks.

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