If I knew then
that you'd change me forever
that you'd redefine my definition of lover
and affect my ability to love
would I have surrendered?
If I knew that sunshine
would become an eye-sore
the fragrance of rose, a poison,
and smiles a weapon
would I have surrendered?
Would I have surrendered
If I knew forever had a limit,
that I wasn't in your dreams,
that yours was the last kiss I wouldn't question
that 'I love you' are just words
and night wouldn't end...
would I have surrendered?
Woah a great poetic sarcastic poem on bitter love it must be. Strong words emotive n lamenting regret tone n words. Kudos for the fine freeverse style. Pls do review my latest poem too called poetry commentary.....
When i reached this part..i was like dang! ! ! that line just a good punch line about time..and whole poem just amazing! and can be such a romantic letter too
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Write comment. Very impressive write, Leslie. Read my poem, Love and Iust. Thanks