If I Died Tomorrow Poem by Sandra Osborne

If I Died Tomorrow

Rating: 3.1


I could scream
for days
inside this
stupid rain.

And I could hurt
for years
inside these
stupid tears.

But if I died
Tomorrow,
Tell me
Which you’d see

A pouring out
of love, or hatred,
flowing out
to me?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Herbert Nehrlich1 17 February 2005

If you died tomorrow I would make you the longest, most erudite and meaningful (do like that erudite word) poem. Then I would stand in the rain and read it to you, loud enough so you could hear it and fast enough before the worms (see my poem Worms) could start their nibbly work. Just do let me know if you would be wearing the chiffon in pink. H

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Sandra Osborne 17 February 2005

Thank you Herbert, you are so very sweet, and Janice was right too. And of course, chiffon. Gotta go out in chiffon! ;)

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dissatified exmember 25 February 2005

If you died tomorrow girl. You would be remembered with so much warmth and love by all. Hugs Jan

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Nasra Al Adawi 17 February 2005

you poem do deserve a vote I was really touched and moved

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Nasra Al Adawi 17 February 2005

you poem do deserve a vote I was really touched and moved

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Allan James Saywell 17 February 2005

DONT DIE SANDRA OTHERWISE I WILL HAVE TO STAND IN THE RAIN IN MY PINK CHIFFON PANTIES, THE RAIN WILL MAKE THEM SEE THROUGH THATS SCARY ISN'T IT, YOU WILL SEE A BIG WORM THEN AND IT WONT BE GREEN, WELL IT WASN'T LAST TIME I LOOKED wITH A WARMTH ALLAN

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Rusty Daily 17 February 2005

After reading 'through a child's eyes I would say love.

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