If I Can See I Can Fly Poem by Kasia Fedyk

If I Can See I Can Fly

Rating: 2.8


True freedom awaits
with anticipation
placed in a vision
of an opened window
to discover the potential
and its true meaning

In a glass I sit
I see all around
and hear the sounds
liberate me, liberate me
my senses alive
confinement I am in
aware, not free

In silence I dwell
inside the glass
is my spirit
Wings need space
to glaze upon the
energy of air
Fire I need
for strength
water for survival
earth for rest

In flesh I may be
in the energy of glass
spirit is always free
with no limitations

To experience both
is an immense treasure
if I can see
with both eyes
I can fly with
both wings

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Romeo Della Valle 07 August 2012

Beautiful, deep and very touching! I love it! I totally agree with the other fellow poets: it is very inspirational! 10+++ Thank for sharing and keep it up! God Bless You! Romeo-NYC

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Hamid Negah 05 August 2012

Kasia, i can not say anything about The value of your poetry, just i can say i enjoyed so much.

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Neela Nath Das 04 August 2012

Man is born free but everywhere in chain.True freedom we desire to get, but, somehow, we have to stay confined.Lovely poem Kasia.

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Payal Parande 04 August 2012

i am in awe...such a beautiful write and so inspirational using so many different elements to show the the real meaning of life makes this wonderful piece more feminine and gentle with dip passion and energy within it which only can be reveled by reading it and appreciating it.....so thank you so much for sharing it with me and other readers..again a brilliant write from a brilliant woman love you, your payal

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