Kolawole Ajao

Rookie - 3 Points (Akure, Ondo State Nigeria)

If - Poem by Kolawole Ajao

If
He
Degenerated
Like
Roots
Of
Shrubs
Amidst
No
Sin
And
Guilt
Call
Him
A
Saint

If
WhenIn
His
Prime
He
Wined
And
Din ed
With
Men
Of
Valour
Call
Him< br>A
Hero

If
He
Ever
Spoke
And
Sat
With
Sages
And
Poets
An d
Etchers
Call
Him
A
Polyhistor


Comments about If by Kolawole Ajao

  • Rookie Ombuge Moses (9/1/2011 7:10:00 AM)

    nice, nice...liked the style...true freedom poetically. Beautiful poem (Report) Reply

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  • Veteran Poet - 1,245 Points S.D. TIWARI (8/11/2011 5:53:00 AM)

    Good one. In very limited words expressed what you want to say. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 30 Points Ezediuno Louis Odinakaose (8/10/2011 6:17:00 PM)

    Nu stile, unique. the beauty bout poetry is being able to create ur stile.
    freedom of inner Xpression. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 63 Points Eric Cockrell (8/5/2011 7:03:00 PM)

    well done... if... we listened to our hearts we could hear other people! very good poem! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Diane Osman (8/5/2011 11:20:00 AM)

    nice...and i agree to suen bewaji (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Jim Troy (8/5/2011 10:28:00 AM)

    Great job......... makes me rub my chin and consider........ I love your style
    and choice of words............. I think you are a polyhistor........ Thanks for asking me to read and comment............. Respectfully: ........... Jim Troy (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Jim Troy (8/5/2011 10:24:00 AM)

    I love your style......... It makes me rub my chin and consider things..... and your ending is profound and a wise choice of wording..... Glad you asked me to read and comment........ I feel you are a polyhistor........ Respectfully: Jim Troy (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Seun Bewaji (8/5/2011 10:23:00 AM)

    l love the way u do it in ur own way, the massage is really clear. keep it up (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, August 5, 2011

Poem Edited: Saturday, August 6, 2011


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