If! ! ! ! ! Poem by Aastha Uppal

If! ! ! ! !

Rating: 2.7


iF is a word
which comes ahead
In every human mind

iF is a word
For which every man
has an incomplete dream

iF is a word
for you and me
Open the door of success
with this KEY! ! ! ! !


-aAstha

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Eyan Desir 20 December 2009

nice write well express

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Rajinder Singh 24 December 2009

simple and well written.keep writing

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Sivashanmugam Shanmugam 24 December 2009

Nice, if it is in simple, it may be a good thread...keep it.

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Shelly Shelly 26 December 2009

very plane written poem...still innocent thoughts with plane reasons...

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Afzal Shauq 28 February 2010

iF is a word for you and me Open the door of success with this KEY! ! ! ! ! what a sweet poem is this one..really fantastic..well done 10/10

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Aranthabailu Ummar 05 October 2011

the unending hope and disatrous too, if goes imcomplete

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Vishwas Anand 27 March 2011

So simple, yet carrying a powerful statement! Well said!

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Anita Trivedi 15 July 2010

A very short and sweet........ great........

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If, such a small word..but can be great in stature. Loved it! ; D

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Nazma Lucky 22 April 2010

Excellent, , , , , , , , , , , little but means big, , , , , , , , , , , , , , ,

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