Adeline Foster

Gold Star - 9,222 Points (Instructor of poetry, Hagerstown, MD)

Idle Folly - Poem by Adeline Foster

Idle Folly

Down at the corner barroom
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Topic(s) of this poem: humorous


Poet's Notes about The Poem

Just a tale from observation.

Comments about Idle Folly by Adeline Foster

  • Annette Aitken (7/24/2016 10:40:00 AM)


    A clever tale of people watching, with humour thrown in, nicely done

    Annette
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  • Pamela Sinicrope (4/22/2016 8:48:00 AM)


    Love the ending. Fun piece of writing! I enjoyed. (Report) Reply

  • Edward Kofi Louis (3/22/2016 8:54:00 AM)


    A windome dame! Nice piece of work. (Report) Reply

  • Mike Smith (3/17/2016 6:02:00 PM)


    Good one. This reminds me of the type of scene I could watch play out at the taverns in my hometown. Good use of rhyme and good storytelling. Thanks (Report) Reply








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