Faithfulness is a wish to have
Praying in the altar of divine love
I search forth, from dawn to dusk
To bestow the ideals in your heart
Thought a gift in me will do the sway
With carriage and optimism to mold a clay
Of an ideal we, in this saccharine world
And you to dwell here in my heavenly adobe
An endeavor so rocky, stiff and bold
Never will be warm to an eyes cold
Glimpse of a callus appreciate the shot in me
Barren beauty, bewildered in the thoughts of He
Death’s arrow in an apple fruit present
Reasons constructed to fall permanent
I couldn’t embrace a rosy torn
Continuous bleeding is what I born
Strange sadness elope not in me
Tears fall in the pinky pearl petals
Quivers the entire being of he
Rest not in the arctic mountains
Lay sound in the arms of a balmy young
its like each verse is a different pearl, strung together to make a beautiful necklace. pl read my new one 'finally, a goodbye'
No doubt..it's included in the top 500 poems..It's beautiful! ! Great work! ! !
Like several little stories following each other, several feelings expressed, in a very unique and touching way, I'd say very peaceful poem, beautiful one
a poem very different from many of your writes...is very deep...honestly thought out and written 10
This poem is good all because theres a deeper meaning than whats already being said...It shows great symbolism to...i give it 4 stars out of 5
The title is very alluring, pulling the reader into your wonderful work of art. A poetic artist you are and among the best. This one was one of my favorites. A great read
I will agree with anyone that says its a very well written but i think you should reach out to the world you least understand and see hwo that effects your writing. Lovely beyong comparison though.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
nice composition... good work on emotions... Overall: Nice lyric poem, though some unclear persona within your work....