Icon Of Will…..0806 Poem by saadat tahir

Icon Of Will…..0806

Rating: 2.4


Pointing dishes at galactic streams.
Sighing stars, echo faintly screams.

Deep in vistas amid glimmering clouds,
incredible happenings in weird shrouds.

Translucent haze of billowing dust.
Worlds apart from our baking crust.

Collapse, group, twirls expands.
at once at bay with unseen strands.

Unfolding guise, deep abysmal depths.
A balance is kept in peeking stealths.

Traveler silhouetted on lonely moor.
Watches agog at his life and tour.

Gazes above at amazing shows.
Coaxing teams as he lifts and ploughs.

Unassuming mundane or regal garb!
Tuned to melodious chimes or jesting barb!

My enterprise afoot at warping speed,
Zipping past, vantage seat on done deed.

Puny, naked, trivial I stand.
An icon of will in so much sand.

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08 june,10
Buraydah-KSA

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Subbaraman N V 12 July 2010

A great write that I really enjoyed! Thanks for sharing.

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Nazia Usmani 03 July 2010

... lovely esp the ending.. trivial i stand....an icon of will in the sand.... hmmm it tells alll.... a doctor myself n tat too kashmiri.....keep writing with an iconic will. regards daffodil tears

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Almedia Knight-Oliver 08 June 2010

A profound poem that words are drawn from the depth of the author's being! Inspie, of life's woes, puny, naked, trival I stand An icon [ an image] of will in so much sand An excellent poem a 10+++ [ problem with the voter register]

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