Iceberg Poem by Tara Crown
Iceberg
Sometimes I look at my life
And see Im outside looking in
Hovering above that bubble
In observation of my own sins.
Like a balloon on a string
Longing to float away so free
Or perhaps a blooming flower
Rejecting the stem to unfetter me.
If I had arms of any strength
I'd slice away those binding roots
With the knife of my own power
A clean cut, a clean wound.
But now I stand here knowing
That such threads will never break and
I flick my cigarette too hard, losing the tip
Of my iceberg
That's just the tip
Of my iceberg.
And what a clever running-on image to crown all that imagery. Nice reading you again, Tara. Warmly, Gina.
What power contained.Really captivating and good use of metaphor in this one.Love Duncan
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4/24/2024 12:52:31 PM # 1.0.0.1119
The anger and energy in this are the iceberg. Thanks for showing us the tip. The meter perhaps stumbled a little, but what iceberg is a perfect icecube? Wonderful. -chuck