Ice Water Poem by Tailor Bell

Ice Water

Rating: 4.9


Here on the surface of the sun
Its hard to remember what you were concerned over
Ten thousand degrees or more
Inside hosts of hot-house cooks abound
To stay cool you have to move about
Stroll around some, maybe
Over by the magnetic flux zone
Note to self: Pickup some nice shades at the drugstore

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Melvina Germain 04 September 2006

I believe this is again in the abstract zone--I like it---Melvina

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Steve Hagget 05 September 2006

Well I love the obscurity - so many meanings possible. Good poem, Steve

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fanniesson - 06 September 2006

this one here is on my list of things i like but i dont know why

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Duncan Wyllie 06 September 2006

This has a very individual style Tailor Thankyou Love duncan X

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Patricia Gale 09 September 2006

Ah the grander of the Tailor Bell style!

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Heather Wilkins 24 September 2013

a good write Enjoyed

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Heather Wilkins 24 September 2013

a good write Enjoyed

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Chuck Audette 12 June 2009

Thought-provoking AND scientifically accurate (re sunspots being cooler) ! Nicely done! -chuck

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Risha : Ahmed 18 July 2007

This poem also has that distinct flavour. A unique idea.

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Alison Cassidy 29 June 2007

The intensity of fire and ice - an impressive surrealist piece of whimsy with a down to earth coda. Love this. Allie xxxx

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