Iam Made Of You! Poem by Reshma Ramesh

Iam Made Of You!

Rating: 5.0


Me, I am made of little things,
choc o chips, stems of tulips,
made of pages from a book
sure, come and take a look!
I am made from tunes of a love song,
probably from everything wrong,
I am made of grains of cereals,
made of little bits of commercials.

Made of bits of hope,
shiny bubbles from a soap,
I am made of glitter in the gold
or so you were told!
I am made from scents of the vanilla,
whites of cyrilla, spin in the twirl,
made of pink in the pearl,
the hulas in the hoops,
made of creme in the soup

Maybe I am wrong, but baby, it is true,
I am made of the fire in you,
made of the love you give,
I am made of timeless time,
surely Darling, I am made of YOU! ! ! !

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Fay Slimm 24 December 2008

I love this one Reshma - - it sings along the lines and of course it is a beautiful love poem too....... top marks for the ingenuity.... from Fay.

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Greenwolfe 1962 25 December 2008

I agree with Marria. This is an awesome poem. I gave it a 10. I will also take it as a favorite. This was creativity at its best. Marvelous! Just Marvelous! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! GW62

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Patti Masterman 10 February 2009

I think you are made of a little bit of everything (not a bad way to be) Very fun poem; thanks for writing.

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Ted Sheridan 28 December 2008

I really liked this one very much! It is very well crafted.

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 28 December 2008

Well every on needs a sweet girl, choc chip too, can not get better than that..: -) Andrew 10

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Kesav Easwaran 27 December 2008

a good poem in rhythm made of strong emotional love...well done, Reshma...10

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Sadiqullah Khan 26 December 2008

some impersonal confessions, , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , ,10

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Reshma Ramesh

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Bangalore, India
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