I Would That I Were Not Daughter Of Your Home Poem by Farah Ilyas

I Would That I Were Not Daughter Of Your Home

Rating: 4.8


Taking promenade, i met a lady...
Having sleak blonde hairs.............

Asked me what do you do here?
With peculair smile i replied......

With short height, bulky figure
What can i do here..................

Adjusting her glasses............
She promptly said.................

As if she remembered something
She called out to me.................


Whose daugter are you.............
I guess you are daughter of Ilyas a person well_known

Younger two daughter of him seem like groom
Having beauty beyond the someone predict on


But

Eldest daugther of whom..
Being proved bad omen for their home..
Outward Appearance of her's filling their life with thornes..
Hath personality as clumsy loam...................................

Hearing this, i lowered my eyes
Rubbed my palms,
Tears came on..

Till then to still....

With such wistfull desire my life is going on..

'I WOULD THAT I WERE NOT DAUGHTER OF YOUR HOME'

Farah Ilyas

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Marian Passidomo 04 March 2012

heart breaking. She has beauty that her family doesn't see or treasure.

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Jahan Zeb 12 March 2012

Is there anything that can be called beautiful? If yes my dear Farah..... then.... Is there anything that cannot be called beautiful? You are the sweetest of all..... never can u be a bad omen...

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Heather Wilkins 02 July 2013

beauty lies deep within each person. a good read

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Yasmin Khan 18 May 2013

All we are concerned with outward beauty and this makes blind to whatever lies deep in human soul....the beauty that is immortal and timeless...I think this is the powerful theme of this narrative poem.

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Captain Cur 14 June 2012

A tragic story brilliantly written with intense emotional impact. Well done.

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Laron Green Sr. 24 March 2012

good poem i enjoy reading nice real experince

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Wahab Abdul 23 March 2012

I wish the poem is not auto biographical, it is fictional, with fictional characters, taking the as not real i like the story i mean the concept, and the expression is up to date, modern....rest of the things like agree with jahan zeb.

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Farah Ilyas

Farah Ilyas

Faisalabad, Pakistan
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