I Won't Fasten My Lip Poem by Soha Zidan

I Won't Fasten My Lip

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I won't give up
I won't surrender
I'll strive till the end
I won't burn my boats
I can't deny the weakness
I can't neglect the drain
I can't reject the wither
or even the pain
Too many battles wrecked my ship
I know that it will give it a chip
But I won't give up or shut my lip
I'll say what to be said and get it to the tip
I won't give up.. I won't surrender
I won't shut up or fasten my lip

Monday, May 30, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: struggle
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
George Samuel 14 June 2016

Too many battles reck my ship, . Iike that.p Please read my poem Your Smile, thanks.

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Soha Zidan 14 June 2016

Oh yes for sure, George. The more the battles the weaker the ship. I will for sure read your poems.

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Tom Billsborough 14 June 2016

What a brave poem. Most stirring. Well done

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Soha Zidan 14 June 2016

Thanks Tom :)

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Shakil Ahmed 30 May 2016

nice expressions, an amazing poem, thanks for sharing

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Soha Zidan 30 May 2016

Thanks to you for passing by and sparing the time to read my feelings, Shakil.

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