I Wish You Could Care Poem by ackh 4ever

This expresses so well the heartache and heartbreak one has undergone and the resolution that comes from it. One that gives strength, determination and endurance to the one who was left alone, scarred and emotionally beaten, by a love that was not true at all. Although the words are few they say much. Thanks for sharing your thoughts, view and concept. Hope you don't mind though, found an error and with a bit of a tweak will only enhance the message: Your first line reads, 'i wish you reallydid care' instead of 'I wish you really did care'. It's only a minor thing but it is amazing how it looks and reads if properly set out. Also, you will notice that I have used a capital I, not a lower case i, only because it looks better as presentation can also enhance ones work. Well done. Many blessings to you