JENIE FRANKSAY

Rookie - 5 Points (07 august 1996 / samastipur)

I Wish I Could Live Forever - Poem by JENIE FRANKSAY

THE SETTING SUN
THE WATERS RUN
THE REDDISH SKY
HOME, BIRDS FLY.
I SIT AND GAZE.
IN AMAZE,
THIS BEAUTIFUL NATURE,
I WISH I COULD LIVE FOREVER.


Poet's Notes about The Poem

I WROTE THIS ON MY VISIT TO KASHMIR.

Comments about I Wish I Could Live Forever by JENIE FRANKSAY

  • Rookie - 361 Points Shania K. Younce (10/5/2013 4:31:00 PM)

    I could never want to live forever! However, I do feel deeply in tune with the beauty that you see! (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Survi Sharma (6/24/2013 1:53:00 AM)

    image created is vivid
    great choice of words
    and a nice verse
    keep penning
    you have potential (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 175 Points Vizard Dhawan (3/14/2013 10:45:00 AM)

    oh..what a nice piece of poem....lovin'it...so true and natural...hats off to you and ur talent....check my poems too... (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, March 14, 2013



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