I Wish (Depressing) Poem by Alexandria Rios

I Wish (Depressing)



I wish, that when I pass I be remembered as the most loving girl on the Earth.
I wish, that when my parents fight
I could disappear in the dark.
I wish, that when that gun was fired
They didn't have to see the blood.
I wish, that I could stay alive
To see my life be more than this.
And, so much for wishing, now I'm dead.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tesla Blackburn 25 June 2009

A very creative way of making such a poem. I love it. I have a few that's suvicidal like that. I give u 100+++++++++

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Fading Heart 31 May 2009

You have got so much to give how do you come up with this stuff.I wish, that when that gun was fired They didn't have to see the blood. I wish, that I could stay alive To see my life be more than this. That is writen so poetic. P.s i know what you mean

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Geovanni Leaño 22 March 2008

awww... 'Everything does goes according to what we really desire... but sometimes it goes indirectly! ^_^' I love this poem... it captures the feeling i once had... -GanNi

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