I Wish Poem by reva fetty

I Wish



I wish on a star

I wish i had a car

I wish i had someone to love me

I wish on a star

I see tonight

I wish i may

I wish i might

For the first star

I see tonight


by reva fetty

Tuesday, May 5, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: wish
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
i always wish for so much things when i was little now i want other people to wish to
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tay Tay 06 May 2015

now that is something i wish, and i like how you used wish i may, wish i might on the first star i see tonight

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Musa Gift Masombuka 05 May 2015

Nice words very simple and powerful and meaningful. Well done 😊. This love ain't loyal.

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Musa Gift Masombuka 05 May 2015

Me too I wish. What a powerful meaningful poem. Very short and sweet. Well done 😊.

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